The Long Decline

Canada used to have a vibrant critical culture. What happened?

In the ’80s, Metcalf waged an effective campaign against “academic” criticism. In Kicking Against the Pricks, which is by some distance his best book, he makes a convincing case for his concerns. For one thing, in an essay called “Punctuation as Score,” he demonstrates a sensitivity to language, and he makes that something of a calling card. (It’s as if he were saying: I’ve meditated on words, on what they can do, and on how they are most effectively used. Have you?) An essay like “Punctuation as Score” is, for me at any rate, so amusing — and instructive — that it’s possible to forgive the shaky foundation of his argument in other parts of the book. Foremost among the shaky premises is the idea that “good writing” is easily distinguished from bad. Anyone who has actually tried to set down rules to help discriminate between good and bad writing knows just how difficult this is. Metcalf doesn’t set down rules, though. He takes sentences or paragraphs that he considers examples of brilliant writing and then does the written equivalent of pointing and saying, “There, you see?” Having spent so much time arguing against the “academic,” there really isn’t much more that Metcalf can do. He has painted himself into a corner where any introduction of system or method would itself be considered “academic.” Not surprisingly, he and his followers do a lot of pointing.

Another problem for those who wander into his critical books looking for help in finding “good writing” is that Metcalf tends to like finicky prose, and he particularly likes English versions of finicky prose. His own sentences, those he quotes as examples of “good writing,” are often overwritten and, at times, awkward in their frank desire to be good. It wouldn’t usually be fair to point to the failings in a writer’s prose as a sign that he or she does not know good prose from bad. There are great critics who can recognize the good in art without being able to reproduce it themselves. But Metcalf is a special case. In his 2003 autobiographical book, An Aesthetic Underground: A Literary Memoir, he compares literature to fine wine and speaks of his sensibility as if it were a highly developed palate. His argument implies that as a connoisseur of wine can tell good wine from bad with a sip, so the trained literary mind can tell a good book after a page or two. He has made his sensibility the issue.

Now, of course, many critics behave this way. Metcalf himself borrows the “connoisseur” analogy, quoting Cyril Connolly. But a novel or short story is different from wine in that, often and with the best work, you must finish it to know what is effective and what is not, to know where a work fits in. It’s easy to find bad sentences in Edgar Allen Poe’s work (Aldous Huxley does, and snickers at them). But Poe stays in the mind, awkward prose or not. (Crome Yellow? Not so much, though no doubt it is “better written.”) Dostoyevsky is a similar case. Yes, Nabokov was right to criticize Dostoyevsky’s writing. And yes, Demons is, for long stretches, badly written and tedious. But I defy anyone to point to the equivalent, anywhere in world literature, of the scene in which Kirillov, the nihilist, must decide whether or not to kill himself. Pure, unforgettable nightmare. Fanatics of “great prose,” like Metcalf (or Nabokov), reduce novels and stories to one of their elements and then insist that that element, style in this case, is the only legitimate one for critical consideration.

What critics like Metcalf — and Connolly before him — have done is to declare the fineness of their own sensibilities sufficient to tell good work from bad. But, of course, they are the only possessors of their sensibilities. There is no basis for a universal aesthetic scale, unless the thought behind a sensibility is unpacked. Just to be clear: I’m convinced Metcalf and I, if we sat down together and read a page from a certain book, would agree, maybe eight times out of ten, on what is good and what is not. On the evidence, I think Metcalf and I have similar sensibilities. But those who have been influenced by him — Ryan Bigge, for instance — are not on the same level and don’t possess the same credibility, though they allow themselves to make the same kinds of pronouncements.

So, one could legitimately say that Metcalf has turned a generation of reviewers away from “academic” evaluations of literature. His work suggests that pleasure is the most important aspect of any work (as Philip Larkin, in an essay called “The Pleasure Principle,” did before him), and he made the critic’s own pleasure, or non-pleasure, the accepted content in an evaluation of literary works. Finally, in anthologies like The Bumper Book, which he edited, Metcalf encouraged reviewers to vividly express their opinions, especially their unfavourable opinions, in the belief, first, that it leads to discussion and, second, that a pungent put-down is more entertaining.

For some twenty years now, we’ve had the discussions that unfounded, pugnacious reviews bring. What knowledge or understanding of literature have they given us? Ryan Bigge insulting Leah McLaren in the pages of the Toronto Star, Carmine Starnino insulting whoever doesn’t happen to share his preference for certain kinds of verse, Philip Marchand expressing the opinion that poets shouldn’t write novels. The discussion is rarely helpful in building a shareable aesthetic. One of the very few clear opinions shed by Philip Marchand, for instance, is his belief that anyone who does not appreciate the greatness of Tolstoy is “deficient in taste, period.” A dubious opinion, given that Henry James, who has as great a claim to “taste” as Marchand, disliked War and Peace, and the late-career Tolstoy felt that his own early work was too verbose. As with all Metcalf’s children — and all of the critics I’ve just mentioned have been edited or published by him — Marchand’s statement is about himself, his belief in War and Peace’s greatness. He offers no defence of his opinion, believing that none is required. And so, we have come to the point where the mere fact of an opinion is more important than the basis for it. This is neither criticism nor reviewing but autobiography. Marchand is telling me something about himself. Starnino is telling me about his sensibility and how much he believes in his beliefs. Bigge is settling a personal vendetta with McLaren.

We have gone so far away from the idea of criticism, from the elaboration of a communal consideration of the books we read, that it really doesn’t matter who comments on our novels or poems or plays. One opinion is as valuable as any other, because the work is a pretext for talk about one’s opinions, or for the generation of high emotion. If, under the supposed tyranny of academic criticism, the literary object disappeared under a mountain of methodology, nowadays it vanishes beneath the ego of the reviewer or the reviewer’s desire to create talking points. It vanishes beneath the tyranny of someone else’s pleasure.

This is all, of course, part of a cycle. We move, as critical thinkers, toward the communal or away from it, toward the idea of a common critical enterprise or back to belief in the sanctity of opinion. So, perhaps the time has come to revisit the idea of literary theory, to reconsider a virtue at the heart of it.

In Alternating Current, Octavio Paz writes of criticism that it is “a world of ideas that as it develops creates an intellectual space: a critical sphere surrounding a work of literature, an echo that prolongs it or contradicts it. Such a space represents the meeting place with other works, the possibility of a dialogue between them.” Paz’s is a vision of criticism as communal construct, the creation of a place where books meet, but it can also be taken as the vision of a place where thinkers and lovers of literature can evolve a shareable language. At the end of any critical revolution, we are left with jargon. Words like “logocentrism” or “différance” are a stink given off by the corpse of that movement known as deconstructionism. It’s important to remember, though, that they once held ideas that were, for a time, useful in finding a new vantage point on literature, in creating a common ground for thinkers about literature.

Above, I spoke of James Wood. His early work is exemplary of the worst of criticism (or reviewing) as plastic surgery. If one enjoyed the theatre of operations, one could regularly watch Dr. Wood cutting away work that he felt wasn’t worthy of the pursuit that is “great literature.” But with How Fiction Works, something important has changed. Though the book doesn’t acknowledge its own prejudices and assumptions, James Wood has begun to move away from judgment and toward the contemplation of ideas (“free indirect style,” “detail,” the nature of “character” in fiction, etc.) that might serve as a useful ground from which we can all talk about novels or short stories. Today’s preoccupation with free indirect style has the potential to become the next decade’s “phallogocentrism,” but it was startling to read Wood write of David Foster Wallace and Thomas Pynchon with an eye not primarily to a dismissal of “hysterical realism,” but rather to an understanding of the necessity, the logic of their creation. And in that possibility of understanding, there is what is best about theory: the brief — inevitably brief, because every generation has to renovate the language and idea of criticism — sense that literature is one of the most startling things we humans do, our hive making, our adaptive coloration.
“The Long Decline” is adapted from Beauty and Sadness, a new collection of non-fiction to be published by House of Anansi Press this September. André Alexis is the host of cbc Radio’s Skylarking, and a contributing editor with This Magazine.
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11 comment(s)

June 15, 2010 13:25 EST

Please could you point me to an ivory tower near here? The last one I thought I had found turned out to be a white elephant ...

The blurring of those critical boundaries you decry as a qualitative decline seems to me just the levelling of all boundaries by the force of profit, wherein beauty is to be found only and always in the eye of the consumer.

Tant pis.

June 15, 2010 20:30 EST

A lengthy piece, a lot to digest in one (or two) sittings.

Mr. Alexis points a lot of fingers and, for the most part, I think he's on target. Book reviewers in this country are deficient but that goes back many years: too many friends reviewing friends, a reluctance to harshly criticize a work by a major Canadian writer for fear of having a cold glass of wine tossed in your face, should the two of you happen to meet at Harbourfront or some other cultural watering hole. Just a glass, mind you: no Canuck writer I can think of has the guts or balls to actually provoke a fistfight (we're not THAT passionate about our work).

Book sections have been scrapped or reduced in size and prominence AND dummied down—then again, Canadian publishers are releasing so much crap it's hard to sympathize. Readers in this country have, sadly, grown accustomed to the politically correct social engineering handed down on high from the publishing poobahs in Toronto: NO to genre fiction, YES to anything that emphasizes race and place. NO to tales featuring a multi-generational starship, YES to narratives of multi-generational immigrant families struggling to keep their identity in a new land. NO to ground-breaking, innovative prose, YES to imitative, derivative efforts that bring to mind the likes of Atwood, Shields and Munro.

Too many editors in this country are poorly read or, perhaps more to the point, not widely read in anything outside their aesthetic and intellectual comfort zones. They shy away from works that challenge their ironclad preconceptions and wither when confronted by a truly original talent.

Readers in our home and native are clearly BORED by the tepid, uninspiring fare McClelland & Stewart, Penguin Canada et all are churning out. The bestseller lists reveal a dearth of Canadian titles (to the extent that the GLOBE & MAIL was forced to print a separate roster of Canadian books). Readers have voted with their hard-earned dollars and the results are conclusive. Canadian publishers remind me of the dinosaurs who watched a meteor streaking across the sky, exploding with a ground-quaking impact but had no idea what it MEANT...

June 15, 2010 22:01 EST

I agree with everything #2 had to say. Remove the cronyism and nepotism of Canadian media (handfed by a crony-overblown CBC) - and maybe expand the regular points of view beyond, say, the same 20 Canadian authors, and perhaps Canadian readers bother noticing enough to keep these wayward editors up to task.

Ken CruceJuly 04, 2010 23:59 EST

This may seem to be a petty point, but Stephen Jay Gould never used a middle initial for his books. It was never "Stephen J. Gould". Most readers familiar with his work would know that.

Why is this important? First, it is a courtesy to the writer to print his name as he wishes. Second, in an era of databases with millions of books and authors, many with common names, it is far more efficient to use the name of the author exactly as it is on the book.

The Times Literary Supplement routinely drops middle initials of North American authors. Maybe the Brits don't like middle initials because it looks so American. Also, British book publishers will often drop the middle initial of a North American author when a book is republished in the UK.

You might be thinking, "Picky, picky." But, this should be an important issue as part of a brand management campaign — and an author's name is certainly a brand.

gordon phinnJuly 05, 2010 00:00 EST

While I am normally loath to comment on an article excerpted from a book, for fear that the editing may have been quick and dirty, I shall risk the venture this time out as Alexis's theme rather duplicates my own "Metcalf: A Counterblaste" from a decade ago. Cast into the netherworld of limited chapbook distribution, it did, however, receive its very own eternity in the form of online notoriety, courtesy Michael Bryson's Danforth Review.

While Metcalf has undoubtedly had a deleterious influence on critical thinking in our literary culture, encouraging a host of young disciples to splurge their passionate but poorly argued opinions onto print as an antidote to the groaning weight of Canlit boosterism and nationalist dogma left over from the seventies, it remains a perilous proposition as the actual lasting effect of his "capering cap and bells" comedic prancing is still in doubt. As an editor he has midwifed some fine work from both David Solway and Terry Rigelhof, neither of which show any signs of collapsing themselves into the kind of vacuous clownish posturing exemplified by our John in books such as 'Volleys' and 'Kicking Against the Pricks'.
Alexis's singling out of James Woods as his whipping boy rather misses the mark I feel. I can think of half a dozen critics, both US and Brit, who are his equal. Sven Birkets anyone? William Gass? Frank Kermode? Not to mention our very own George Bowering, whose innovative critical work, spread over several volumes and decades, is, as yet, criminally underrated in his home country.
And litmags: let us not forget the sterling contribution of The London Review Of Books, where great and witty criticism emerges every fourteen days, from a variety of barely known names, on all manner of subject matter. I vainly attempted to reproduce its high standards in my own Books In Canada essays, an attempt doomed, of course, to the usual Canlit fate of financial collapse. Finally, It would not be amiss to say that every lit mag I've written for has gone out in a blaze of futility.

gordon phinn

AnonymousJuly 05, 2010 20:58 EST

...All too accurate, especially for us young folks who are forced to put down our Bigge-riddled Canadian broadsheets and go stateside to find any younger critics with any argumentative chops.

— Whokebe

AnonymousJuly 13, 2010 15:32 EST

This is the way with the entire Canadian 'cultural industry', not just literature. Film & TV (which is the bit I know) - it's the same. There is great talent in this country to be certain, and we do see it shine on occasion. But by and large opportunity comes to those with the greatest capacity to write grant applications or be cool and ironic while at the right cocktail parties.

In film, getting a nod to be considered by Telefilm is like gaining entry into a fraternity; except it takes years - not just frosh week - of correct networking. Television broadcasters - some whom have never even produced a program themselves - decide the fates of careers based on whether or not they 'like' an independent producer. Oh but if they don't like you, but like your idea, they might take it though, and give it to their in-house production wing or their husband's production company to produce. Yes, of course it's highly unethical, but don't say anything - because that will shut the tap on your career for good.

The power to create space for talent to blossom and good work to be made is concentrated in the hands of the few in this country. I don't think we ask ourselves enough what the people that make these crucial decisions have done to deserve that amount of power. Critics, publishers, broadcasters, funders can be incredible forces of influence, but they must have intelligence, vision and above all, daring. If there are weak and uninspired people in these roles, the work that is commissioned will be weak and uninspired. If these people can only grasp a passing trend instead of having their eyes set on the horizon, then we will have, as we do, a culture of received ideas.

I am not naively suggesting that nepotism or concentration of power doesn't exist elsewhere, but perhaps in larger arenas where decision makers are only as good as their last decision, daring and fearlessness are qualities that are encouraged. Sadly, in our cultural industry, where bureaucracy and petite-etoile syndrome reign, what we encourage our decision makers to be is fearful, small-minded and ever-wary of those they haven't seen around the cocktail circuit (looking cool and ironic) for years.

AnonymousJuly 13, 2010 15:33 EST

This was very engaging - compelling, even - in its glaring inconsistencies, and in what it reveals about this presumably once vibrant critical culture.

For all of the self-professed idealism for some communitarian idyll, this agora that promised a rich dialogue on letters, or at least a "chronicle" from a "community of equals," the tactics of schoolyard one-upmanship remain (the same "pungent" tactics which helped destroy the culture, apparently):

"It’s very, very rare to find a reviewer — whose job, after all, is to convince us that he or she knows whereof he or she speaks — who will even admit the possibility that he or she is the weak member in the community he or she is chronicling."

Whoa. Pardon the close reading, but the choice of the word "weak" is interesting, as is the article "the" (yes, there is a definitively singular person on the bottom rung here).

The one description of a critic aside from the naming names here, the presumably bold j'accuse that those in the know will nod knowingly about (all part of the chronicle of the small community) is rendered this way:

"... a short, pompous man with thick, dark-rimmed glasses (a self-styled “critic”) ..."

Ah. He's short. He wears glasses. You know the type. Bet you he won't admit he's the weakest one in the room either. In caricature veritas, I guess.

The limitations of Wood and Metcalf we're also going to take at a kind of roughly sketched face value here. Wood has his own essay about Flaubert that does more to illuminate what one could argue are blind spots in Metcalf's criticism than anything here, but presumably, as with Solway or Bigge, Alexis would prefer we just put the term critic or criticism between quotation marks just so, you know, that we all know who aren't invited to the next book launch.

Ah, but it's all dying anyway, and though we rage hard against the dying of our lost ideal where equals may frolic, let us also get a few kicks in at those among us who may have also written from idealism. Their ideals just weren't ours. Or mine ... um, two times out of ten.

PWJuly 17, 2010 20:16 EST

“No one directs films like Orson Welles anymore, and the films of Judd Apatow are too thinly plotted. Therefore, movies today suck.” The illogic of this parodic statement parallels the illogic of Alexis’s tirade against today’s Canadian criticism: “No one today is Northrop Frye and the Globe and Star book sections have thinned out. Therefore, there is no decent criticism in Canada anymore.” The problem with both arguments is they ignore all the in-betweens and lesser-knows that maintain the quality and integrity of the craft. Welles is gone—Madden is not. Apatow writes thin plots—Joel and Ethan Coen write thick ones. By the same token: Frye is gone but Bruce Meyer and Sina Queyras are not (and Atwood, by the way, has published a hell of a lot of criticism since Survival). And while Metcalfe may have produced cantankerous books dubious in seminal value (so Alexis believes; I find them refreshingly irreverent), Alberto Manguel has produced erudite ones of far greater influence. If the Globe and Star reviews fail to satisfy, subscribe to Geist or Open Letter—or read Lemon Hound online. Canadian criticism is far from all it can or should be, but if one digs below the surface of legend and mines more than just the most obvious names and titles, there remain a lot of solid gems to be found. – Peter Webb

Terry GoldieSeptember 13, 2010 01:08 EST

I agree with much of what Andre says, especially the decline in newspaper reviewing, but his point about John Metcalf is what interests me most here. The Metcalf position ultimately states that writing is only writing, and thus perfect sentences are the goal of writing. The obvious metaphor for Metcalf and his ilk is that they cannot see the forest for the trees. Most readers see trees as primarily a way to get to the forest.

AnonymousSeptember 13, 2010 01:08 EST

(Not very) interesting. Yawn. The only writer/critic of value in English is ...

Drumroll:

André Alexis promoting André Alexis at his autobiographical worst.

Typical (not topical). Someone please provide an example of one original thought in this tantrum or, better, all book editors should simply hire André Alexis to write all of our reviews.

Case closed. Coughin' nailed. Martin Levin must surely give him a raise, now ...

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